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| [1.] Dsi/Fragment 125 15 - Diskussion Bearbeitet: 3. November 2020, 09:12 (Klgn) Erstellt: 23. July 2020, 20:36 WiseWoman | BauernOpfer, Dsi, Fragment, SMWFragment, Schutzlevel, ZuSichten, Zulminarni 2001 |
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| However, in the social system of Indonesia with its strong patriarchal values, women bear the heaviest burden in the existing condition. Women, who comprise 51% of the Indonesian population, have to struggle enormously in facing poverty, violence, and injustice daily. Women’s concerns are most often put aside in public discourse because the government and the community consider these problems exclusively females’ problems, irrelevant to the developing political context. Political and economic discussions commonly ignore women as political and economic agents in the Indonesian system. Consequently, improvement of women’s living conditions is somewhat slow compared with that of the other community members (Zulminarni, 2001).
Zulminarni, N. (2001). Indonesia: In the middle of unsolved crisis. Instituto del Tercer Mundo-Control Ciudadano. Retrieved July 4, 2007, from http://www.onlinewomeninpolitics.org/indon/crisis.htm |
In the social system of Indonesia with its strong patriarchal values, women bear the heaviest burden in the existing condition. Women who constitute more than half of the Indonesian population (50.1%) has to struggle hard in order to face poverty, violence and injustice in their daily lives. The problem of women is put at side in public discourse, because the government and the community consider this problem an exclusively female one, separated from the developing political context. Political and economic discussions generally ignore women as political and economic agents in the Indonesian system. As a result, improvement of women's living conditions is relatively slow compared with that of the other community members. |
The source is given at the end of the paragraph, but it is not made clear how close the text is to the source. |
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| [2.] Dsi/Fragment 126 13 - Diskussion Bearbeitet: 3. November 2020, 09:13 (Klgn) Erstellt: 23. July 2020, 20:45 WiseWoman | BauernOpfer, Dsi, Fragment, SMWFragment, Schutzlevel, ZuSichten, Zulminarni 2001 |
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| In the health field, even though it tends to decrease compared with previous years, the maternal mortality rate is still relatively high and the worst in the Southeast Asia region, with a 334 deaths per 100,000 live births ratio. Most of the time, the death cause is related to pregnancy problems such as bleeding, poisoning, and infection. Poverty has prevented pregnant women from access to health services and has caused malnutrition. This condition is preceded by a level of infant mortality rage that also remains high, with 46 per 1000 births (Zulminarni, 2001).
Zulminarni, N. (2001). Indonesia: In the middle of unsolved crisis. Instituto del Tercer Mundo-Control Ciudadano. Retrieved July 4, 2007, from http://www.onlinewomeninpolitics.org/indon/crisis.htm |
In the field of health, although it tends to go down compared with previous years, the maternal mortality rate is still relatively high and the worst in the Southeast Asia region, namely 334 per 100.000. In general the death cause is related to pregnancy, like bleeding, pregnancy poisoning and infection. Poverty has prevented pregnant women from access to health services and has caused insufficient nutritious fulfilment. This condition is followed by a level of infant mortality rate that is also still high, namely 46 per 1000 births. |
The source is given at the end of the paragraph, but it is not made clear how close the text is. Additionally, Zulminarni names her data source as "from the Biro Pusat Statistik (National Bureau of Statistics) 'Statistik dan indikator jender (Statistic and Gender Indicators) 2000'". |
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| There was barely any mention in the national media that only two years earlier the political elite of all colors had written her off as a potential president for Indonesia. | There was little mention in the national media that only two years earlier the political elite of all colours had written her off as a possible president for Indonesia. |
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